A silent adieu - POW -01/20/07
I sit in the corner of a lovers memory, a silent, cobwebbed thing, frozen in time I speak, my voice a whisper, ''please let it be'' and I am almost no more. Where once there was magic, and the...
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Thank you scorpfemale for warm welcome and kind words, just to add I have done as suggested, and am suitably admonished, Brendan
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Thank you Alexis, actually returned there two years ago and managed to trace her sister, have recently sent her ''Mary'' a number of poems including this, have no idea at time of writing what she...
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Brendon..Your opening stanza brought a sigh..and what followed was sigh worthy written as well, a haunting read, enjoyed it. Welcome, Hugs Sky
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Thank you Sky, sighs will do it for me every time, uttered one or two myself in the writing, for truth be known I still love her, expect I always shall, Brendan.
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Brendan this is very strong and spiritualy charger verse here. Much enjoyed Shadows
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~Brendan~ A beautiful serenade from the heart and soul that brushes the hearts of those blessed to read the words so softly... Quote:Where once there was magic, and the kindness of truth, the...
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Thank you Dawn, delighted, touched even, that you should care to comment on my humble offerings, I do appreciate it, Brendan.
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To me, to capture the reader *besides just writing very good* You must have a good title "A silent adieu" Very good... The first line must set the poem up in the reader's mind, attract them to...
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Late at night here and I need some solace, I read your words and feel comforted, fate can be kind, often arriving when most needed, thank you, Brendan.
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You touched me way beyond these words you shared with us Brendan. Congrats._________________________________________________ Musann All New All Metal ! The FieldsPoetry like you like! ...Read More
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Quote:And if I were granted a final last wish a solace to comfort me into that long night It would be that once more my true love I could kiss, and for Mary to know she remains my delight. Bravo!!!...
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Welcome to New Horizons Brendan! Truly a captivating write dear poet Congratulation on the great award
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Mutually touched that you should think this, or indeed anything I write be of some worth, thanks for award, have saved and shall treasure, Brendan.
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Hi Stephanie, sorry for late response, no excuse other than unable to get on-line as much as I would like, and when I do I'm so slow ''read inept'' it takes me ages to write anything, thank you for...
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surprised to see i had not yet replied to this share cuz i swear i had already! Brendan, this is such a touching, warm share ... could not help the smile and sighs at the feelings ... well done!...
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